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although it's a clear picture to read, i feel it's missing something to make it perfect.
to my mind, the frame in the photo is quite inspiring, but there's a corner missing, it could be your starting point for the reading of the pic.
your expression is a little empty, or bored to me. it looks like you stare with nothing in mind, no joy or surprise, or whatever.
and last point i feel is too much (or too less), is B&W. the background is a little flat to my pov, and the picture itself looses its depth.
you could have put a light make up on your eyes also to give some shades of grey and add some lighting to them (which are really nice).
otherwise, your head fits perfectly in the frame, and your arm adds to it, giving a strong reading.
a good shot, with good points, but short to great to my mind.
but keep up the food work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up"/>